01 January, 2006

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The next day is arrived.

"Sir, I will tell the truth at that house, and you don't catch the murderer immediately. Ok?" Dennis tells the higher police. "I will have another surprise for you."

Everyone is at the house, and Dennis starts to tell the truth.

"The murderer is here. One of the Toms," saise Dennis.

"Mr Bill, you are!"

"What? Me? Why? Ah?" saise Bill with a scared look.

Dennis looks at Sally.

"You drivel! He will not be murderer!" shouts William.

"Why is Bill? Mr detective," asks Sally.

"Ha-ha, I'm kidding," saise Dennis.

"Um.. Mr Bill, you aren't murderer," smiles Dennis. "But your girl friend is."

"My girl friend?" saise Bill surprised.

"Yes, Miss Sally Hitler hasn't marry to you, She is your girl friend," saise Dennis.

Sally is very surprised, she shouts, "You wrong me!"

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"Miss Hitler, do you know why I doubted the murderer is you?"

"Why?" asks Sally.

"At the beginning, the Cons were most doubtful. You said that they're crazy. I suppose that Mrs Tom died on 13/5. The Cons also went to travel on that day, but they went in the early morning, at 8:00 am, and when could they kill Mrs Tom? Before 8:00 am, I think you all slept at this house. If the Cons could come inside the house and made Mrs Tom died by suffocation, that would make some big noise. Mrs Tom would shout loudly as she could or some sounds would be made when she struggled. You all could sleep as normal and didn't know that the dead Mrs Tom was moved out of the house to the sea? In fact, Mrs Tom was dead on 13/5 - 14/5, so the Cons aren't murderer."

"And do you remember what did you say for the statement? Those were very strange. You went to karaoke, shopping and went to bank after bought some fishes and vegetables, then went home. Anyone will carry some fishes and vegetables to go to karaoke and doesn't go home first? You wanted us trust you hadn't go home between Mrs Tom at home and she was missing. You said too much. And when you found that Mrs Tom was not at home, you called the police immediately. You are sure Mrs Tom was missing, but everyman will call his family member first."

"Mr Bill and Mr William, had you see your mother 13/5 to 16/5?"

"No, we seldom see mum, because I am very busy and William always goes outside. Even if we have meal, mum has it at her room and Sally looks after her," saise Bill.

"Ha, Mr William always goes outside with friends for playing," saise Dennis.

William blushes for what Dennis has just said.

"Yes, they won't know too much about Mrs Tom. If you didn't call to the police, maybe they wouldn't know," Dennis saise to Sally.

"Mrs Tom was missing last four days, and the coroner found that Mrs Tom died last 6 or 7 days," saise Dennis. "If someone performed Mrs Tom in the day she was missing, how about the before 2 - 3 days. A murderer will perform the woman he has killed 2 - 3 days? And Miss Sally, you look after Mrs Tom for her meals, but you didn't find that she wasn't Mrs Tom in 3 days. Impossible!"

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"Mrs Tom wasn't killed by one. And we can also say that she wasn't Miss Sally Hitler killed."

"What do you mean, Mr detective?" asks Bill.

"You are The Hitlers' daughter, Miss Hitler?"

"What? I'm not! They just our neighbors."

"Do you mean that you don't know they are your parents?" asks Dennis. "Let me tell you, you are their daughter. The police already checked it."

"Ok, If it is, so what?"

"The Hitlers killed Mrs Tom," saise Dennis.

"On about six days ago, The Hitlers killed Mrs Tom. They killed her because of Miss Hitler. Mrs Tom had gotten sick, and she would look for a doctor. She knew that her sons are busy so she wanted to look for another doctor. She needed helper. She wouldn't call her sons for help. She didn't like Miss Sally Hitler so she didn't seek help from her. The neighbors could help her. The Cons went to travel that early morning so she sought help from the Hitlers. Mrs Tom didn't know the Hitlers are Miss Hitler's parents."

"Mrs Tom wasn't good to Miss Hitler. She scolded her for everything, and didn't accept Miss Hitler marry with Mr Bill Tom. Maybe we can say Mrs Tom loved her son very much, and wanted to give the best things to Mr Tom. But the Hitlers could just see her did the bad things to their daughter so they are very angry," saise Dennis.

"Sally has nothing wrong. It is just her parents' mistake," saise Bill.

"No, Miss Sally also planed to kill Mrs Tom, but her parents killed her first. The Hitlers used the cotton and ice-lolly sticks to kill Mrs Tom because there are many the same things at doctors' home, but the KJY pill appeared at Mrs Tom's room was impossible. The doctors must keep the KJY pill and won't give it to the people to eat without doctor around. There are two doctors in this house, they might bring the pill came home, but they hardly saw Mrs Tom, the pill wasn't possible to go inside Mrs Tom's room. And in fact, they hadn't bring it came home and Mrs Tom didn't need it."

"Miss Sally always goes to the hospital Mr Bill works for and She knows the hospital very well. She could steal the KJY pill for murder. Use medication to kill people more easily. She was going to kill Mrs Tom but the Hitlers did that before her. She told a lie about Mrs Tom was missing after 3 days because she was afraid the corpse would be found. And her parents ran away during that 3 days."

"Will I do the stupid thing? If I use the medication to kill her, I will be a prisoner!"

"Mr Con!?" The Toms are very surprised.

"No, you won't!" saise Mr Con.

"If you kill Mrs Tom, you don't need to lie and you won't be a prisoner. It is because you became a psychotic in the last few years. It was because of your parents and your husband."

"Drivel!" shouts Sally.

"Please admit that, Sally. Your mother and father already came back and admitted their guilt.."
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"Ok.. I admit that I wanted to kill Mrs Tom but my parents did that before me and..."

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"Thank you for you told me about the Toms, Mr Con," saise Dennis with smile. Mr Con was contacted by the higher police last night and then he told Dennis something.

"Ho ho, you are welcome. We three families live here for a long time. I know them more than themselves. The children grow up and change to be another one. The Tom brothers are busy and didn't care about the old Mrs Tom. Mrs Tom still loved them very much. And Sally, alas.." saise Mr Con.

"Why doesn't Sally tell the Toms Mr and Mrs Hitler are her parent?" asks Dennis.

"It was because Sally quarreled with her parents when she was six. Her emigrant uncle came back to visit her and she followed him to go to the foreign country. The Toms moved to here after she left. Five years ago, Sally came back. She still said that they weren't her parents but she missed them very much. She wanted to marry to Bill also because of her parents. She can see her parents more if she lives here. She helped Mr and Mrs Hitler to ran away, we can see that she still loves them," saise Mr Con.

"You know her a lot, so she doesn’t like you. If you are not here, she won't tell the truth. In fact, we haven't any evidence to prove the Hitlers are murderer. Many things are my conjectures. I planed to test Sally then use the test result to prove. When she heard that Mr Bill Tom was the murderer, to her relief. But the evidence is too bad. Fortunately, you appeared and said that the Hitlers had come back."

"Don't tell them I lied," laughs Mr Con.

3 Comments:

At 2:24 AM, Blogger Ada Lam said...

Esther, your story is very impressive! I can see that you've thought of everything. Are you a fan of detective stories? Hmm.... have you considered writing a story for the next school newspaper?

 
At 2:26 AM, Blogger Ada Lam said...

By the way, I think the new background in your blog is much much better than the dark one. This one looks more cheerful. I LOVE your background music, too. Who sings it and what is it called? How do you include background music here?

 
At 2:35 AM, Blogger Ada Lam said...

Some words that you can use to write thrillers next time:

There are many suspects in this case but Sally was the prime suspect.

She provided a false alibi. The truth is she had not gone to the karaoke that day.

 

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